taper my corners
to a square one
I go a
head forward
length of one
animal
a time
the source
always
in me
me in mind
and not me
the body with
our selves
the love of
else
what else
every full
filling body
never thinking
what if
the glass
well deepens
the march out
a closer kin
middles ends
needs
ant above all
hell
what is
a mind
in wakes
numbers
comfort
the everyday
every day
feels my feet
come emotion
others'
anothers'
come what may
do they do
Poem's Score: 0.0
Jimmy Lo lives and writes in Atlanta. His chapbook 'A Reduction' is available from Little Red Leaves Textile Series. He can be seen writing Free Poems On Demand (freepoemsatl.org) at different street corners. More of his writing can be found on his website jimmylorunning.com.
JULY GENIUSFor July 2013, Everyday Genius is pleased to present poems that were rated below 0.4 on the "Poetry Assessor"—a tool that "is designed to determine whether a poem has the characteristics of a professional poem, or, alternatively, an amateur poem.
We publish the poems here, with their scores, not to confirm the Assessor's judgment, but to allow human readers to decide for themselves.
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